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Re: My Lame Inking-more added 10/22/07
The hair looks very cool and the starkness of the white and black work with his pose. If you wanted things to be more round/break up the big chunks of ...
Oct 21, 2007 -
Re: drawing/painting portfolio
Thanks!! collage, self portrait. Not finished because I am not finished.
Oct 19, 2007 -
Re: painting, please critique
Very nice! The play of the highlights and the texture of the horns is wonderful. It looks like there's some blue in there in the fur and along with the ...
Oct 19, 2007 -
Re: Ways to display poetry
Depending on what you want for the size/orientation of this, you could make a string of the poems - they could be on anything, paper or plastic or cloth - ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Beginning and over description.
The over description: it happens. Either you can think before writing about using adjectives as sparingly as possible, or just let yourself write and then attacking it in the editting ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Describing your Characters
I like describing characters through what they think about themselves vs. what other people think about them. It doesn't matter to me much what they look like; if there are ...
Sep 14, 2007 -
Re: drawing/painting portfolio
This is all stuff from the end of last year/the summer. I'm doing AP Portfolio this year, so after a few weeks or a month there will probably be quite ...
Sep 12, 2007 -
Re: Sponson's Year of AP Independent Art
cool stuff. I love the colors in the portrait - they're almost radioactive. What did you do that in? pastel?
Sep 12, 2007 -
Re: Portraits, one work-in-progress. *edited*
I like these a lot. Hair can be tricky because it's hard to delineate; it's just something that takes some practice. if you can be sketchy with hair - rather ...
Sep 12, 2007 -
Re: Condemnation of Grammatical Poetry
This rant is not about the same thing as your article, nor is it a response, but it is something that I think you might find interesting all the same. ...
Sep 4, 2007 -
Re: How do you write poetry?
Personally, when I'm feeling some sort of emotion and the words align themselves right, I write it down. Then, I'll edit it until I like it and it makes sense ...
Aug 26, 2007 -
Re: First Person Poems
I think first person poetry has some of the same advantages and pitfalls of first person fiction; it can be an amazing insight into a mind or a very personal, ...
Aug 26, 2007 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
"The Leaf Storm and other stories" by Gabriel Garcia Marquez; I really like the two subtitled 'a tale for children'; they're like fairy tales thrown somewhere more desolate and with ...
Aug 16, 2007 -
Re: Fleurs
I like the different levels of focus with the fourth one -- it would have been nicer if the closer flowers were in better focus, but the focus plus the ...
Aug 14, 2007 -
Re: Young Adult Fiction
I used to read YA books by pulling the new but strange ones off the shelves - the books that looked like they'd been published a few years ago at ...
Aug 14, 2007
